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DuPz0r
post Apr 5 2009, 10:13 PM
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So i started this little project which involves designing and creating a 3D digital character which i will animate.

I started with loads of drawings and ideas, and got loads of feedback from friends and peers. I came up with a story where the protagonist (main character) started out as a poor child, who grew up in a slum like part of town. He only has 1 good friend as a child which is a girl. She moved away without saying why, and he ends up getting a job as a dishwasher in a local and popular bounty hunters guild. He grows up around many well known warriors, and eventually becomes part of the guild when he becomes old enough. Some years later he finds out that an infamous organisation has abducted this girl he once knew and his mission is to save the broad and kill the person responsible.

This is a quick sketch and layout of the character that seemed to be the most popular of the bunch:


This is what i have done so far in 3D:


It still needs to be tweaked a bit. Once i think it is ready, i will put it through Zbrush and add loads of detail then texture it before i rig it and animate it.

So, give me some constructive critisizm and tell me what you think of it?


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post Jun 11 2009, 09:26 PM
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Naa he's a spartan.
Looks better in that last screen, still something dodgy about the lips, particularly the upper one.


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- DuPz0rô   Character Design - WIP   Apr 5 2009, 10:13 PM
- - The Mekstizzle   Why the fuck should he help some bitch that just l...   Apr 5 2009, 10:36 PM
- - DuPz0rô   lmao! I wanted him to use a Blade for his ma...   Apr 6 2009, 08:34 AM
|- - Pieface   QUOTE(DuPz0rô @ Apr 6 2009, 09:34 AM) 149...   Apr 6 2009, 09:55 AM
- - Ind•   Yeah I agree with pie, sort of like Legolas. Don...   Apr 6 2009, 10:42 AM
|- - TwoFacedTanner   QUOTE(Ind• @ Apr 6 2009, 05:42 AM) 149400...   Apr 6 2009, 04:02 PM
|- - Stoic Person Eater   QUOTE(TwoFacedTanner @ Apr 6 2009, 12:02 ...   Apr 6 2009, 04:23 PM
- - The Mekstizzle   If you're going down the Bow and Arrow route g...   Apr 6 2009, 12:32 PM
- - Destruction-Overdrive   How long have you been in that class for?   Apr 6 2009, 03:53 PM
- - DuPz0rô   QUOTE(Destruction-Overdrive @ Apr 6 2009...   Apr 6 2009, 04:40 PM
- - DuPz0rô   I made a quick clay figurine of my design. Tell me...   Apr 29 2009, 04:56 PM
|- - TwoFacedTanner   QUOTE(DuPz0rô @ Apr 29 2009, 11:56 AM) 14...   May 1 2009, 08:28 PM
- - FreeTitty   Very good it looks about 3 feet tall, is it?   Apr 29 2009, 05:45 PM
- - Baby Fark Marney-zax   Looks awesome man. I suck at clay stuff.   Apr 29 2009, 05:46 PM
- - DuPz0rô   I will leave it to dry out a bit, then add details...   Apr 29 2009, 10:59 PM
- - Boss Up   It would look better if you would widen his upper ...   May 1 2009, 05:31 PM
- - PS FANBOY   QUOTE(DuPz0rô @ Apr 6 2009, 08:34 AM) 149...   May 1 2009, 07:06 PM
- - marney1   Can't help thinking I've seen this charact...   May 1 2009, 08:10 PM
- - DuPz0rô   lol. I don't know really. I was trying to get ...   May 5 2009, 10:25 PM
- - marney1   Coming along nicely he looks like he's had bot...   May 5 2009, 11:14 PM
- - DuPz0rô   Yeah i know lol. Still finishing the face there, i...   May 5 2009, 11:20 PM
- - Ind•   Yeah just get the detail down, it's lookin qui...   May 6 2009, 03:20 PM
- - DuPz0rô   It has been a while, but here is what i have so fa...   Jun 10 2009, 09:01 PM
- - marney1   ^ Very impressed and I know you're not finishe...   Jun 10 2009, 09:07 PM
- - DuPz0rô   Yeah his face still looks pretty shitty. But it is...   Jun 10 2009, 09:19 PM
|- - marney1   QUOTE(DuPz0rô @ Jun 10 2009, 10:19 PM) 15...   Jun 10 2009, 09:26 PM
- - Ind•   His face is too long, his nose in particular is qu...   Jun 10 2009, 09:27 PM
- - DuPz0rô   This is my favourite one: oh and indy, his face ...   Jun 10 2009, 11:13 PM
|- - marney1   QUOTE(DuPz0rô @ Jun 11 2009, 12:13 AM) 15...   Jun 10 2009, 11:19 PM
- - Destruction-Overdrive   Dude must do 500 sit-ups every day.   Jun 11 2009, 08:49 PM
- - Ind•   Naa he's a spartan. Looks better in that last...   Jun 11 2009, 09:26 PM


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