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> Lyrics to a hip hop song im making D:, ... not a 50 cent club banger
Mad Space Ghost
post Dec 13 2008, 09:21 PM
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lyrically rich livin always givin relivin every thanksgiving a potent god never unforgiving way beyond hes metaphysical//

believin make you attract real life ridicule its pitiful really makin brothers act silly//

its a pity some kids grow up to emulate fiddy not tryin to diss but i guess ignorance is straight bliss it kinda make you reminisce//

makes you miss whos dead and gone that god took back not too long with no sense of right and wrong//

feelin hasty knowin any second that your life could become crazee//


havent really wrote in a while plannin on putting this over the pete rock instrumental for respiration by mos def and talib kweli since i got an actual microphone. and no im not going for " OH MAYNE IMA BLOW YOUR FUCKING HEAD OFF IWTH MAH NINE MILIMETER IM SO HOOD" shit... sorta going for a light hearted hip hop song ya dig? tongue.gif

Feedback nao plox.

Also with update with more lyrics once i worked on it more.


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post Dec 14 2008, 12:10 AM
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not bad actually. I wanna hear the final thing, and I don't want it to sound amatuerish, so use proper programmes to balance the sounds.


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post Dec 14 2008, 12:23 AM
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I use FL Studio mainly to antares auto tune (lol tpain) and reason 4 and i got protools but havent installed it yet.


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post Dec 14 2008, 01:16 AM
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You need more lyrics about bitches and blunts.
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post Dec 14 2008, 01:44 AM
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QUOTE(Stoic Person Eater @ Dec 13 2008, 07:16 PM) [snapback]1475040[/snapback]
You need more lyrics about bitches and blunts.


Thats not very constructive criticism.

Also, i think im not able to record this song because when i wrote this i went off flow lyrically and the Pete Rock instrumental is hard as fuck to get a flow to. So i might just scratch it get an easier beat and write to it, so if i do that I'll post in here.

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yes i did thats why i turned it up and i spat to this//

just a little way to show you how i flow i don't really need a record deal though//

desire to flow always in the lime light and know when to spit just like a blonde dike//

freestyle here, what makes you feel like a bottle of beer incapacitated but still here?//

and no not a Klondike spit when the times right rhyme with the lime light swag with your rhyme right//



this is my new song to the beat of kanye west's champion


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post Dec 14 2008, 07:52 AM
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Ohhh noooo this guy is rapping? Haha making beats too?

Check my ish out btw, click the link in the sig. All I use is FL Studio.

Oh and a good, simple, quick program to record with is Adobe Audition.
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post Dec 14 2008, 03:02 PM
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QUOTE(Styl @ Dec 14 2008, 01:52 AM) [snapback]1475077[/snapback]
Ohhh noooo this guy is rapping? Haha making beats too?

Check my ish out btw, click the link in the sig. All I use is FL Studio.

Oh and a good, simple, quick program to record with is Adobe Audition.


Yea, i wanted to get into music production instead of just doing graphics all the time. biggrin.gif

Also, holy shit if you only use fl studio. Those songs are tight man...

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post Dec 14 2008, 03:35 PM
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Sheep makes beats, you should PM him for info.

My friend does beats too, uses reasons and something else that I don't remember the name of along with some fancy expensive keyboard.

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post Dec 14 2008, 04:23 PM
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QUOTE(Mad Space Ghost @ Dec 13 2008, 08:44 PM) [snapback]1475044[/snapback]
QUOTE(Stoic Person Eater @ Dec 13 2008, 07:16 PM) [snapback]1475040[/snapback]
You need more lyrics about bitches and blunts.


Thats not very constructive criticism.

lyrically rich slappin my bitch livin always givin relivin smoking some blunts and slappin some women every thanksgiving a potent god never unforgiving way beyond hes metaphysical like Stoic PE so mad lyrical//

believin make you attract real life ridicule its pitiful really makin brothers act silly, neowga please, roll up a philly lets get illy your sister can suck on my willy//

its a pity some kids grow up to emulate fiddy, fuck them bitches and suck on their titty not tryin to diss let's roll up that cannabis, but i guess ignorance is straight bliss it kinda make you reminisce like that time in the bathroom pac's mom drink my piss//

makes you miss whos dead and gone, fuck the bong it won't take too long that god took back not too long with no sense of right and wrong like ms. wong mouthing on my dong all i ordered was the pork fried rice and a fortune cookie//

feelin hasty ms. wong said i'm mad tasty like a honey phizillee knowin any second that your life could become crazee so let's get nakee and do that shakee smoke a blunt and let everything get wavy //


You're welcome.

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post Dec 14 2008, 06:13 PM
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QUOTE(Stoic Person Eater @ Dec 14 2008, 10:23 AM) [snapback]1475118[/snapback]
QUOTE(Mad Space Ghost @ Dec 13 2008, 08:44 PM) [snapback]1475044[/snapback]
QUOTE(Stoic Person Eater @ Dec 13 2008, 07:16 PM) [snapback]1475040[/snapback]
You need more lyrics about bitches and blunts.


Thats not very constructive criticism.

lyrically rich slappin my bitch livin always givin relivin smoking some blunts and slappin some women every thanksgiving a potent god never unforgiving way beyond hes metaphysical like Stoic PE so mad lyrical//

believin make you attract real life ridicule its pitiful really makin brothers act silly, neowga please, roll up a philly lets get illy your sister can suck on my willy//

its a pity some kids grow up to emulate fiddy, fuck them bitches and suck on their titty not tryin to diss let's roll up that cannabis, but i guess ignorance is straight bliss it kinda make you reminisce like that time in the bathroom pac's mom drink my piss//

makes you miss whos dead and gone, fuck the bong it won't take too long that god took back not too long with no sense of right and wrong like ms. wong mouthing on my dong all i ordered was the pork fried rice and a fortune cookie//

feelin hasty ms. wong said i'm mad tasty like a honey phizillee knowin any second that your life could become crazee so let's get nakee and do that shakee smoke a blunt and let everything get wavy //


You're welcome.


Bwahahhahaha!

That was great...


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post Dec 14 2008, 09:13 PM
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QUOTE(Mad Space Ghost @ Dec 14 2008, 10:02 AM) [snapback]1475112[/snapback]
Yea, i wanted to get into music production instead of just doing graphics all the time. biggrin.gif

Also, holy shit if you only use fl studio. Those songs are tight man...

Hell yeah nothing wrong with that.

The trick to FL Studio is plug ins and samples. Search for VST's and sound packs, get a nice collection going and that's all you need.
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post Dec 18 2008, 09:16 PM
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QUOTE(Daft Punk @ Dec 13 2008, 01:21 PM) [snapback]1474986[/snapback]
lyrically rich livin always givin relivin

believin makin brothers act silly//

tryin to diss but i guess ignorance is straight bliss it kinda make you reminisce//

feelin hasty knowin any second that your life could become crazee//

Let me ask you, son, are you morally against ending words with the letter G?


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post Dec 21 2008, 08:53 PM
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QUOTE(TheAnalogKid2112 @ Dec 18 2008, 03:16 PM) [snapback]1475709[/snapback]
QUOTE(Daft Punk @ Dec 13 2008, 01:21 PM) [snapback]1474986[/snapback]
lyrically rich livin always givin relivin

believin makin brothers act silly//

tryin to diss but i guess ignorance is straight bliss it kinda make you reminisce//

feelin hasty knowin any second that your life could become crazee//

Let me ask you, son, are you morally against ending words with the letter G?


Def.

Also in an attempt to keep this topic alive i have made a song entitled "she" about a girl i've been dating on and off this was supposed to be more of a private song and the lyrics are as "intelligent" or "lyrical" as i like and was more of a thing of just testing my new studio microphone and such so yea.. roast it bitches...

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?iymtzj2ntl2

Also theirs a little bit deticated to Vlad in there.. biggrin.gif


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post Dec 22 2008, 09:27 AM
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QUOTE(Stoic Person Eater @ Dec 15 2008, 03:23 AM) [snapback]1475118[/snapback]
QUOTE(Mad Space Ghost @ Dec 13 2008, 08:44 PM) [snapback]1475044[/snapback]
QUOTE(Stoic Person Eater @ Dec 13 2008, 07:16 PM) [snapback]1475040[/snapback]
You need more lyrics about bitches and blunts.


Thats not very constructive criticism.

lyrically rich slappin my bitch livin always givin relivin smoking some blunts and slappin some women every thanksgiving a potent god never unforgiving way beyond hes metaphysical like Stoic PE so mad lyrical//

believin make you attract real life ridicule its pitiful really makin brothers act silly, neowga please, roll up a philly lets get illy your sister can suck on my willy//

its a pity some kids grow up to emulate fiddy, fuck them bitches and suck on their titty not tryin to diss let's roll up that cannabis, but i guess ignorance is straight bliss it kinda make you reminisce like that time in the bathroom pac's mom drink my piss//

makes you miss whos dead and gone, fuck the bong it won't take too long that god took back not too long with no sense of right and wrong like ms. wong mouthing on my dong all i ordered was the pork fried rice and a fortune cookie//

feelin hasty ms. wong said i'm mad tasty like a honey phizillee knowin any second that your life could become crazee so let's get nakee and do that shakee smoke a blunt and let everything get wavy //


You're welcome.

I like it.


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post Dec 22 2008, 06:49 PM
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I love you Stoic.


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post Dec 22 2008, 08:37 PM
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QUOTE(Mad Space Ghost @ Dec 21 2008, 08:53 PM) [snapback]1476049[/snapback]
QUOTE(TheAnalogKid2112 @ Dec 18 2008, 03:16 PM) [snapback]1475709[/snapback]
QUOTE(Daft Punk @ Dec 13 2008, 01:21 PM) [snapback]1474986[/snapback]
lyrically rich livin always givin relivin

believin makin brothers act silly//

tryin to diss but i guess ignorance is straight bliss it kinda make you reminisce//

feelin hasty knowin any second that your life could become crazee//

Let me ask you, son, are you morally against ending words with the letter G?


Def.

Also in an attempt to keep this topic alive i have made a song entitled "she" about a girl i've been dating on and off this was supposed to be more of a private song and the lyrics are as "intelligent" or "lyrical" as i like and was more of a thing of just testing my new studio microphone and such so yea.. roast it bitches...

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?iymtzj2ntl2

Also theirs a little bit deticated to Vlad in there.. biggrin.gif

The auto-tune sucks. Drop it, or do it properly.


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post Dec 23 2008, 04:25 AM
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QUOTE(IndĽ @ Dec 22 2008, 02:37 PM) [snapback]1476157[/snapback]
QUOTE(Mad Space Ghost @ Dec 21 2008, 08:53 PM) [snapback]1476049[/snapback]
QUOTE(TheAnalogKid2112 @ Dec 18 2008, 03:16 PM) [snapback]1475709[/snapback]
QUOTE(Daft Punk @ Dec 13 2008, 01:21 PM) [snapback]1474986[/snapback]
lyrically rich livin always givin relivin

believin makin brothers act silly//

tryin to diss but i guess ignorance is straight bliss it kinda make you reminisce//

feelin hasty knowin any second that your life could become crazee//

Let me ask you, son, are you morally against ending words with the letter G?


Def.

Also in an attempt to keep this topic alive i have made a song entitled "she" about a girl i've been dating on and off this was supposed to be more of a private song and the lyrics are as "intelligent" or "lyrical" as i like and was more of a thing of just testing my new studio microphone and such so yea.. roast it bitches...

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?iymtzj2ntl2

Also theirs a little bit deticated to Vlad in there.. biggrin.gif

The auto-tune sucks. Drop it, or do it properly.


lmao, i might redo it but im also working on something else so iunno.

btw, would you be opposed to a autotune hook? cuz like my singing sucks and i dont want it to sound horrible or maybe i could get styl to help me out...

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post Dec 23 2008, 03:13 PM
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Sorry man but that sounds fucking terrible over FL, you're way too slow for it, and the auto tune is shit, and using the word "fine gentleman" in a song, while dissing Jagger... Internet Hero, much? It doesn't work.

Also, it just sounds like you've taken all the words from most recent songs and chucked them together.

And get a proper echo tool.


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post Dec 23 2008, 04:35 PM
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I love you Stoic.

You too, boo.
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post Dec 23 2008, 06:39 PM
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QUOTE(Asthenia @ Dec 23 2008, 09:13 AM) [snapback]1476229[/snapback]
Sorry man but that sounds fucking terrible over FL, you're way too slow for it, and the auto tune is shit, and using the word "fine gentleman" in a song, while dissing Jagger... Internet Hero, much? It doesn't work.

Also, it just sounds like you've taken all the words from most recent songs and chucked them together.

And get a proper echo tool.


Yea i got some proper plugins but i might get that sony acid or something like that because i heard it was like fl studio without the something. And like i said this WAS meant to be private for some girl not something i was gonna release. but still thanks for C&C

also, this was my first song ever pretty much

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